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would you jump? by ~A-GOUGHIC-ROMANCE:iconA-GOUGHIC-ROMANCE:



I will carry on
waiting for you
but I wont waste my screams
I no longer cry myself to sleep
I no longer hold on to memories
I just live until they return.

I will drench myself through
get rid of the depression
get rid of the pain
wash it all away
and I will never be the same.

I never want to hear those words
those three simple words
unless you mean it
unless you'd devote yourself
would you jump for me?

Id like to see you cry
to know whether it would harm me
Id want to see us both die together
just so we could be.....
I want to know whether youd think Im beautiful
no matter what you see
would you jump for love though?
would you jump for me?
©2005-2008 ~A-GOUGHIC-ROMANCE
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I wrote it about true love, its what I see true love to be, in a way anyway...it may not be brilliant but I wanted to say it.

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~metalhead101:iconmetalhead101: Jun 24, 2005, 10:28:59 PM
I really like this...I'm going to :+fav:it.i can relate to the poem...especialy the last couple of lines..anyways good job hun :clap:

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Open your eyes
See the divine
~BlackDragon311:iconBlackDragon311: Jun 24, 2005, 11:26:07 PM
Wow.. Touched me deep hun.. :hug: I love it. :+fav:

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I am the darkness still drifting through light. Forever shall I be consumed by the torment within.
Clubs: :iconTheWritersMeow:
~glarawen:iconglarawen: Jun 25, 2005, 12:58:17 AM
Aww! That's so damn good hunni! :D

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Fuck me harder. No harder. Make me cry.
~A-GOUGHIC-ROMANCE:iconA-GOUGHIC-ROMANCE: Jun 25, 2005, 2:05:38 AM
thankyou hunni glad you liked it, thanks for the favourite.

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With us, the burning red lives on....
~A-GOUGHIC-ROMANCE:iconA-GOUGHIC-ROMANCE: Jun 25, 2005, 2:06:26 AM
thankyou, n thankyou for the favourite, tis probably the best poem Ive written in a long time

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With us, the burning red lives on....
~A-GOUGHIC-ROMANCE:iconA-GOUGHIC-ROMANCE: Jun 25, 2005, 2:07:49 AM
thankyou hunni, I appreciate that alot.

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With us, the burning red lives on....
~BlackDragon311:iconBlackDragon311: Jun 25, 2005, 8:17:37 PM
:hug: It was a wonderful poem and you are more than welcome

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I am the darkness still drifting through light. Forever shall I be consumed by the torment within.
Clubs: :iconTheWritersMeow:
=kittie-chan:iconkittie-chan: Jun 28, 2005, 9:51:20 AM
this one's awesome! great work. i love how you capture the emotions.

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"I saw a scary movie once, it got my heart to beating, and I thought, you know this is like love, wrapped up in illusions plotted out by someone else" -~MyBlankPages
~invisible-inc ~ Emotional-Writings
~A-GOUGHIC-ROMANCE:iconA-GOUGHIC-ROMANCE: Jun 28, 2005, 1:20:37 PM
aww thankyou that means alot to me

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With us, the burning red lives on....